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Hello, there it's been a while since I wrote this, so I can't really remember the details. I read over it, and there seems to be mention of 1'00,' once in the past chapter (which was a typo). Can you point me to the '200' as well so I fix it. Also, Pagan threatened to cull half, but never actually did it, so they are still the same number they should be.
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It was indeed an actual reference to that XD
one of the cloaked figures*
added*
back of hand*
and -> before
this sentence is awkward
remove one had
remove today
At this point, you're probably wondering what some of these strange titles mean. For instance, dominus, domini, and tiarna as in this case. These are all titles that mean lord in some form or shape. If you search them up, they all originate from certain groups, which are representative of the type of civilization that the characters in the novel come from. For reference however, dominus and domini are the main form, as the empire is modelled after ancient Rome.
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