Ed_Kousuke

i commented about it on chapter 11

didn't this chapter about kushina wanting to join a gym? if you read back from chapter 3 you know what I mean ..

still repeating previous chapter...

umm... i had read this in the earlier chapters.. now post the real chapter 11

Can anyone post the MTL or raw link here?

I found the MTL version is more enjoyable to read although it is a MTL. One of the thing I found is the MTL version is more light and contain more sense of humour while this one feeling more heavy. This one portrayed the third hokage as an old guilt-ridden man while the real character of the old man is very sly. This cne tried to push danzo as an enemy for targeting the MC. It is said that this translation trying to maintain the slice of life genre in this novel but it cut so many interesting conversation between the characters. overall i think the MTL version is more enjoyable as an slice of life novel.. i don't know how long my comment will exist here...

*Riding

hey author if you read this say hey... i hope kushina and mikoto can give birth to the MC's child and MC don't have another wife beside these 2 like the MTL... although kurenai yuhi is great but too many waifu will only drag the story...

as the story goes, it becomes boring.. what is the purpose of MC existence if he can't even kill the protagonist and always needs to look at his back.. he can just cripple the protagonist since it didn't break the deal between MC and the god..

too much nonsense at the beginning.. can't brain anymore...