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Has potential, but incredibly forced progression. Author often says the same thing over and over with different words. Characters are okay, but the way they are presented makes them hollow. Very interesting concept, but I am dropping due to the cringe factor in the writing style. It's rare that I like the story but hate the writing so much that I just can't anymore. I would come back to reading this if it was formally edited.
random quote mark here seems out of place.
we've spoken less than 50 words to each other, I know how smart you are...
seems a bit harsh