EiLyne

IT’S BAAAACCCKKK !!!

Don't worry, I'm not criticizing your work. It's just that the beginning is very similar to the novel I mentioned…especially the MC being a special forces member, turning into a scum Alpha with a wife and child, the system window offering "yes" or "no" (but she can't really refuse), the bald guy, the original owner of the body also wanted to sell her wife, and the fact that she used to work for a  “boss” etc… The beginning felt quite similar, which caught me off guard, but I've read the first 20 chapters now, and I actually like it. The writing is more detailed, especially in terms of action and character thoughts, which I really appreciate. I apologize for my rushed review earlier 🙂‍↕️

This chapter was an absolute pleasure to read. Thank you for the chapter.

Alright, this chapter changed my mind. Sera went way too far. Electra was kinder since she helps most of the time despite what she made her endure.

Oh no not again (Please forgive each other)

You mean Electra, right? Because it’s what she did to Sera that makes her life more miserable. Both of them need to reflect on their own actions (which are not necessarily correct). Sera is simply playing the role of Electra, which will allow Electra to realize that what she’s did was horrible. I also don’t approve what she’s doing to Electra but it’s a vengeance…🫤

I don’t know how to feel about this chapter…but Electra also deserves it

Thank you, author, for the chapter. I really like the character development, and I'm a bit confused because, at first, I didn't really like Electra with everything she did... but now I love her so much 😭

That was unexpected