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Sorry but holly yap, they are litterally just talking air, nothing worth even noting, kts the same thing in a loop, he is this and the wheel is that and fate is cruel yada yada yada, Author, i commend you, i realy do for taking in such a hard world as a fanfiction but some advice, when you do character dialogue let it have a main point and a reason for the conversation because so far its been nothing but actualle nonsense, sorry for the harsh words but i realy want you to do better, if not for the writers then for your future fics, lets go man you got this🫡🫡

Bro these chapters are so repeyitive, the story has a good angle but your chapters are so short

Well done bro, cant wait to see the next chapter. Will you publish it today or tommorow?

Well done my g, onse again you showing people whose boss

Verry good, i cant wait for the next episode, i wonder how the velaryeons will react to Aerion?

Haha exactly g, i like the way you think, i hope thats what happens though, but its a bit nerve wracking after we saw the latest chapter, lol

I wasn’t thinking about advantage, more of a selfish note, Aerion in my opinion hasn’t been selfish enough. Yes a marriage between leanor and rheanyra would be advantageous but it would make all of the prior chapters where Arion and Rheanyra built their relationship pointless….thats just my thought dude

Well done Author, cant wait to see the next episode, im assuming viserys will be angry and daemon…well i dont think he’ll care that much because he’s so indifferent but atleast this would prove to him that aerion isa worthy brother and they would finnaly have a bond of sorts. Viserys should in my oppinion speak with Arrion one to one and ask about hi reckless behaviour, it would be a good time to ask for rheanyras hand

Author….you cooked a feast g, well done

I mean i’ve liked the story so far so, all i can say is can’t wait for it