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imagine when he dies. he die in one universe and get transfer to another with his memories intact. And every time he fail the other world get destroyed and he found out about it. that will be devastating.

i don't like charlet or what her name she has no personality no goals except to protect the prince i mean sure he help her and all but still he doesn't need protection and in chapter 80 she went to place where they train people to become puppet for the kingdom so am pretty sure when she come back she will act like a robot

is it a harem ?

is it a harem ?

Hello, I am a big fan of your writing. I wanted to make some suggestions that may help you with your writing. First, please don't make it a harem. I noticed that all the characters in the last chapters are girls and all of them are in love with the mc. a lot of fanfic are doing this and it's getting annoying, and in my opinion the mc personality isn’t a lovable character and thena will probably kill the other love interest . Secondly, don’t include religion. What I mean by that is don't introduce prophets and stuff like that. People will get offended. I did it once and it was a disaster. Thirdly, don’t focus too much on world war one and world war two. A lot of fanfic covers that story if you want to introduce people in that period of time, sure but avoid it if possible. keep it up i really love your work and am looking forward to the next chapter.

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this is the best story i read so far. this is the best story i read so far. this is the best story i read so far. this is the best story i read so far.

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