well I am new so I will admit that the meeting with Esdeath can feel a little rushed so I will try to improve that type of scenes in the future. but I don't think mc should know the tropes as even I did not knew them until I started reading light novels. But thank you for your honest review. I will work on it.

actually her teigu was a little special case but she tamed it right away and not lose control at least in the anime. and I will write the scene where she gets her teigu so don't worry. Thank you for pointing out as I confirmed it due to your question so keep asking in future.

well it is not clear in anime but I think lubbock also started doing mission pretty early. And well ,yeah I think it is a little early but i thought to give him this mission to make him experience killing before I move him to the second World which is a little dark world. Thank you for your question and please make a point if you see something wrong so I can improve it.

Empire's soldier uniform.

Young Najenda.

No it was not intentional. Let me check it, thank you vey much.

Thank you very much for it. It will surely help me writing more realistic scenes for my story and characters will feel more natural.

can you please give me some advice on my new fanfic . As according to me your naruto fanfic was the best naruto fanfic i have read ,so if you can give me advice. I will be really thankful

great chapter as always can't wait to see what will happen ahead and a request for the author. I have started writing a fanfic .its just the beginning but i will appreciate if you could give any advice on how to go on about it

Please write your thoughts after reading the story and share any ideas or corrections you can think of .