One of your French girls 🇫🇷
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If this is your best and strangest first chapter, then you haven't read enough. Lol
Really? I also thought that the plot was familiar after I reached the part where he proposed to his fiancè, I didn't know this was a literal Copy + Paste story. Does China not have any plagiarism laws? Or they just don't care. I feel sorry for the original author of "I'm Beloved By All Due To My Investments" since he posted his story first.
Lol. He could just use shades to cover his eyes like Aizawa.
Right? It's kinda weird that it feels like reading a summarized biography. The prose is good, but the elements are shallow. This reminds me of writers who always use "tapestry" every chapter. Lol
This reminds me of the fanfic " The Novel's Extra Extra" LOL. I didn't read it but it always make's me laugh thinking that someday, somebody would write a fanfic on this fanfic titled "The Novel's Extra Extra Extra", and it just keeps on repeating 😂
Oof. rAwr
This chapter was a lot more cringy than usual. It was enough to tickle my inner chuuni that I never knew I had ❤
I like junk food from time to time, but this is just trash. This is just the author's diary of fantasies and fetishes. I don't wanna judge it, so I just didn't waste my time by finishing this. Ughh. There should be a separate category for these kind of stories. Instead of webnovel, put this under "public web diary" or something. Or should atleast have a hazard warning. Ewww
The only reason this scored 2.6/5 is because I gave 5 for updating stability. The rest are only 2 points worth. The plot is dry, and the writing is sloppy. Other characters and world backgrounds are already given, the least you could do is make a decent mc with logical(?) interactions. I'm like reading someone's diary of all their fantasies and fetishes, I won't judge your choices, but the personal bias is strong, and off-putting. This is a one-trick pony that's getting desperate, and after seeing all the other previous works, I don't think I can expect much from this story.