WhimsicalFr

Thank you very much for the review, I will continously try to improve as I upload, and the reason for the abrupt ending of the first world is simply because I couldn't be bothered, I haven't graduated school yet and had a rough patch in life so writing was that last thing on my mind, and months later when I finally managed to build up the motivation, I looked at where I left off and just said f*ck it I'll just skip it. When I read my stuff over I even laugh at it because of how abrupt it is

Praise be his name(I think that was how it goes)

Uppercase Name*

I hate when I have a random hit of fatigue

Black Cat having ah, at least she got the drip on

The fingerless gloves 😭

Damn ma'am, why is you dressed like this in the slums, unless you're strong enough I doubt you'd be safe looking scrumptious

Can't help but cringe a little at words like this because of Chinese Novels

She sound a little too bad to be in the slums