Shaman_Thor

👍Good job👍, keep it up and good luck . 🤝

translation not bad, a few places where wrong words used and syntax story development great, I was really able to get into the story characters at the end seemed to deteriorate , ending could have been extended last part of book seemed to be rushed. but overall, good characters world background was good to. overall, book was a good read

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you are doing a great job with this novel. keep up the good work. have a capsule on me. take care

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good start , keep it up and good luck 🤞

good luck on this one. hope it's good as the last one. keep up the good work.👍

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interesting 🤨