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Moon_Kundu_52523 years ago
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Wow, I didn't expect a backstory here... This is getting awesome
The next morning I left from there early as my mother told me to run. I was lost and a nomad for a year. Then I met Jenny. She was lost from her family too. I feel connected with her. And that is where again I saw him. his picture. But he was now a married man. then everything happened so fast that I barely can accept this is my fate.
Parshawna Macduff
Fantasía · Wendrila_Kundu
Moon_Kundu_52523 years ago
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This was getting just more and more awesome good work
Ch 50 "You are too Late!!!"
Parshawna Macduff
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Moon_Kundu_52523 years ago
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I am literally crying here..............
I closed my eyes while tears rolled down from my eyes. This world has given me a lot of things, but I was unable to enjoy it to the very last... I can understand.. my end is near... I am slowly going towards the darkness... Going away from this world... I only have one regret... that I couldn't see his face for one last time. I wish I could have told him that very day, what he means to me, that I have loved him, with all that I have... I only wish... He could forgive me... not waiting until he returns... Goodbye to everyone... goodbye love.
Parshawna Macduff
Fantasía · Wendrila_Kundu
Moon_Kundu_52523 years ago
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I am seriously in love with this book.... I love how so much of characters and emotions you are portraying author.... I love your work so much.... Keep it up.:)
Parshawna Macduff
Fantasía · Wendrila_Kundu
Moon_Kundu_52523 years ago
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I liked the flashback details Keep it up... i am loving your writing day by day...i am waiting for the next chapter
Ch 45 What Happened in the Last Battle? Who was Venom?
Parshawna Macduff
Fantasía · Wendrila_Kundu
Moon_Kundu_52523 years ago
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they have a broken love story... I feel bad for Jonny and Gracious
Tom nodded as they took her to a near broken hut. Jonny used a spell to light up. And after a long night of being in labor, she finally gave birth to Shawna. Jonny held her in his arms and looked at her with all his love. He kissed her forehead and looked at Gracious. Her eyes were scared and broken. She pleaded while sobbing-"pl-please.. don't take my daughter away..."
Parshawna Macduff
Fantasía · Wendrila_Kundu
Moon_Kundu_52523 years ago
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what kind of mother is she?
A loud cry can be heard from the room as the child cried in pain... His slow weeping... and the faint breath towards the darkness was observed by his mother without any sympathy in her eyes.
Parshawna Macduff
Fantasía · Wendrila_Kundu
Moon_Kundu_52523 years ago
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Woaah!!! here's the flashback now
Gracious looks nervously at her trying hard to suppress her fear. Georgia left a maniac laugh-" HAHAHAHAHA!!!... My poor salve is so naive..." She walked away from a little. Gracious was scared to utter any single word as she sat there crying, praying. Georgia turned around as she looked at her fiercely and said-" that thing in your womb... Is mine... My sacrifice... the pureblood witch... A sacrifice that can give me the powers I want... This WitchLand will be mine!!!"
Parshawna Macduff
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Moon_Kundu_52523 years ago
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i can see the near climax.... waiting for the next part...
Ch 44 Betrayal
Parshawna Macduff
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Moon_Kundu_52523 years ago
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WAIT WHAT?????
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Parshawna Macduff
Fantasía · Wendrila_Kundu