Ryan_Ashari

Grammar mess up sometimes he sometimes she, pokemon name mess too. make me lost interest in reading.

it's good story overall 4.6/5 for me, good enough for reading.

good luck, I enjoyed this fanfic

for me it's good enough

story plot is not bad but better but name and item and jutsu kinda confusing if you good English and understand all plot comic including Characters name, item name jutsu nama then go read but if not don't waste read it it's confusing it would make you dizzy lol 😂

It's just like copy/paste 😅 read = headache

original author is being drafted to military, are you going continue forward or wait till original story continue ?

too short lol 😂

huh why hesitate just kill Blackbeard lol, he is marine top marine even now just become dog WG, knowing Bb with such ambition still thinking kill or not ah pathetic

author not consistent release chapter , it's almost a month no update