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Would normally give the story 4.5/5 but there's a lot of stories there are written 10x times worse and gets better scores than this one. I don't rly understand webnovel score system, but this story defnly deserves the 5 stars a lot more than a lot of other stories, so ig ill give it 5 stars. Very good story with good writing quality though there's some places with wrong grammar (it doesn't rly happen that often, so it doesn't rly matter in the end. sometimes things can be a lil vague, like with amy trying to seduce MC (know that I wasn't the only one who didn't get that) but overall its a solid story that ill keep reading.

lol, though I don't understand the meme tbh

SAME it's really well written

edit, it wasn't very short lol

Ok, so I wrote a lot of shit and then accidently pressed Ctrl+w :/ so I'll make this short. The writing is ok quite a lot of Grammar and word order mistakes. characters are weird and the author repeats stuff over and over again (like i get he looks like a girl, dammit it was funny the first time). Also all the girls fall in love with him after they find out that he's a man, which is annoying. MC is REALLY dense, but that's a part of the humor (again funny the first time not the third). Anyway I find the story to be a ok read. the world is really interesting but I don't have the patience to read through 200+ chapters of not that well written fantasy with "OP hot male gamer proves everyone wrong with his epic "not even trying to seduce you" seduction strategy". also the (!) is really fucking annoying to read every 5 words (that's about the length of each sentence btw) "he grips his cereal. AND PUTS IT INTO HIS BOWL!!!!" I don't need that. It makes me feel dumb somehow. this is not a story for me tbh. I get that others might find I funny but not me so I'm out. tip to author (if he reads this) is to try and spent more time on each chapter, and try to actually make some funny characters and make some funny dialog. don't repeat yourself AND DONT SPOIL. anyway the review was wayy too long (especially after I just deleted the other one I wrote)

yeah it's getting kinda annoying with all the "oooh look so hot" and "ooh so rich i can't even breath" it's just not how normal people reacts to things

*hadn't* is better

190.000 or 1.900.000?