ProudMole

Great ending there! Love it!

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I love the characters and the plot development. The background of the whole story is very fulfilling. There are times when some parts feel like filler but they don’t feel overly concerning. I especially love how the developments in different of the story come together so fluently and smoothly. I realize the writing technique and the use of language can of course use some improvement but it doesn’t effect the reading experience in a negative way. So yeah! Expecting updates! 😄😄

The growth oF the plot was successful. I also like The characters, They are welL depicted aNd successfulLy Introduced. I will Be going On to reAd it.

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