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God I hated those minigames, the announcers voices were so annoying
slight contradiction here. It said that cousin is a year old a couple lines up, then here it says that none of them were over half a year.
this is probably a bit farfetched but would it be possible to merge a deceased demon/human etc with a monster to give it intelligence thus creating new races?
I know his level doesn't hold much meaning at this point, but it's nice to see it go up 11 levels in a single outing
merging with their bodies and taking their racial abilities, now where have I seen that before😂😂😂
OK, you hating for the sake of hating. Your 1st point is invalid since he spent several days inside the dungeon fighting with Marcus and the others. Also since when has anyone in that party ever been given more merit than mc? They literally called him a talented genius after he lied and said he had skill slots. Then they mentioned numerous times that they would never have cleared that dungeon if not for Ethan. Even during the boss fight, the only reason any of them survived was thanks to Ethan using his transformation skill. In no way has anyone in that party ever "received more apparent merit" least of all, Marcus, who tried to show off after Ethan. Unlike Ethan, Marcus got his butt handed to him as he got slapped across the dungeon by one of the first monsters in there.
didn't they spend several hours in a carriage to get to the dungeon? That should be well out of city limits, no?