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TFTC,you can slow down the power scale of the MC and just give him more skills for different purposes
The story is good, but there are three points that I think destroyed the work a little (Spoiler), firstly, the protagonist always gets stronger versions of his abilities through fusions, leaving the old ones obsolete, it would be better if the old abilities improved to stronger forms through level increases, the second point is that the protagonist's harem is very poorly developed, he has almost no romantic involvement with them, giving the impression that it was somewhat forced, apart from the girl's leaving and returning, which was very unnecessary and it happened off screen most of the time, third point is the final fight which was very disappointing he went there and only hit killed both of them,very disappointing
I really liked the story, but the ending was very rushed and unsatisfying, what I liked most about the work was how Grayson always seemed to try very hard to defeat his enemies and how his power slowly increased, this progression of power is simply played out the window in these last few chapters, apart from the unanswered questions, like what happened to Kara and the justice league? What Powers he gained from the other classes and archtypes? so much wasted potential, it's truly a shame.🥲🥲🥲