GeneralDeFartos_L

3 problems are horrible about this novel. The same 3 problems in other Chinese novels. 1- Author repeats and blabbers and goes for word count despite a lot of stuff written become redundant and repetitive. This is the worst point. chapters get elongated for no reason, repeating the same points and going into detail about redundant things. I can skim the chapter in 5 seconds and the whole point of it is that MC is tough because of abc, no need to waste the whole chapter explaining this shit when it was explained a million times before. 2- Chinese propaganda: Chinese is best, others are trash, japan is waste and always wrong, usa is idiot... etc. 3- Vanity. I don't know why but Chinese authors always see the need for MC to somehow be turned into a famous figure. Always showing scenes of people talking about MC and being impressed and so on. Honestly it doesn't even make sense that MC got discovered as early as he did, author just got his Chinese vanity genes kickin' and he had to make MC known to public. If you have patience and can ignore the points above, you will find a fun story about a mosquito that's powering up with a unique storyline and nice progression.

Writing is good. I started the first chapters and thought wow finally a good novel, but then everything crashed. MC is so self centered and edgy, his thinking is what a 14 year old edge lord thinks. Author is probably a kid. MC is not cold and calculative, he's simply insecure and edgy, nothing special about him, he's cringe worthy to be honest. Everything is surface level, everything is shallow. Don't expect diving deep in the world the author is trying to show, it's mostly action, no world building, no character development. MC has awesome power but he doesn't think enough about it, he doesn't plan his power progression, he doesn't think on how to maximize his advantage. All I see the MC doing is having a neutral indifferent expression, and inner thoughts full of paranoia and insecurities. The story would be peak if MC was more mature or smart (you can distrust everything around you and still act friendly with others, you can be the most fun person to be around while thinking of the most efficient way to break their neck) no need to be so edgy. Respect is earned, while MC just envies everyone around him.

His instinct also told him that Dereks group seemed off, now it's clear they didn't have bad intentions.

No. should have built up on the smoke and soul rather than shaping the image of veins and going back to body form. The dude is now a god, not a mortal. He's super weak now, so it's understandable that the system points him and gives him info, but as MC gets stronger he should have more authority and the power in the system transfers to him and he becomes more omnipotent.

I couldn't read further than chapter 9. it's such a let down, nothing unique here, and worse still is that the author wastes a lot of words just for the heck of it,9 chapters passed and the only thing happening is the mc transmigrating with gold finger and decapitating a bad guy and then starting to look for martial arts. that's it. 9 chapters for this. wasted words with no point.

Boring. It started nice, but by chapter 98 I am already incredibly bored and can't even consider reading more.

Honestly, I gave it enough chances. Good concept but badly executed. In short, The writer didn't build on the hook of the novel, he didn't use what made the MC unique to make the story better, rather he turned the story into typical trash novel. Above all that, it was boring, there was no direction, the author doesn't know to make it either carefree or not. There's nothing keeping you reading. MC has good character, The story is meh, the other characters are superficial, and the world background is limited. overall an average novel with nothing outstanding and no reason to keep reading.

very nice novel, I've been looking for a novel where mc is powerful among ordinary people. and this story got it. MC is driven and likeable and the story progression is good. I like it. I reached chapter 579.

I read until chapter 420. It's world building mainly. MC is all powerful, there's no indication of why he's so powerful, even in later chapters he's always portrayed as supreme, but the only time that he personally took action is the first couple of chapters where the novel explained that he has immortality ability and that he basically ate a dragon in the first chapter, and it was a painful process, so that only lands him to being similar to that gods level, but somehow he's so powerful that we don't see him struggling against any other god. that aside, the story is mainly multiple povs of multiple characters in the world he is a god of. My main problem with this story is that there's no continuity, it just shows us a character and their struggle to get to the top in a few chapters and it doesn't show us what happens to them after, it's just implied. Then comes another character and it happens all over again. While it's entertaining at the start, it end up being almost like a filler, there's no point in it if it won't affect the story, most characters that appeared are not mentioned after that, and most events don't affect the story. The story feels lacking, there's no hook that keeps it going and instead it gets boring. It had potential, but the Author didn't use it well, a lot of elements were ignored, MC could be using things to get stronger himself, but all he does is create objects at most and is not increasing his actual power, same goes for his role as a god, he rarely does things, he's an observer most of the time, we rarely even know his thoughts in the later chapters. I obviously liked the concept, so I stuck around for +400 chapters, but the story is really lacking. I wish there was something more to it.

Boring! MC is in the first instance according to him, he has a system but seriously lacks progression. the story mainly feels like a slow sloth. MC keeps getting into random situations, which might feel important but have no significant impact on the overall story. Author covers every little bit and every non essential points and goes on and on writing what seems to be side quests, MC hasn't got an upgrade in forever, and what he gains after every dangerous situation is nothing impressive, it honestly feels lacking. The rewards to risk ratio are not worth it. The author just writes to get the word count going.