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that's right Then, avoid using it too much I say as little as you can along with any other word that gets repeated a lot in the story.

Either way, the I still enjoy it 💪

I like this story from the bit I read specifically chapter 2, you have fun little dialogue, and the writing style is something I'm familiar, since I also started that way, I see keep on writing using dialogue if you want, it makes the story very unique, but if you want to change it that's also an option you could take, either way keep writing.

Another fun chapter, I'm really liking the relationship between Farshtey and Synthwave, but one thing to watch out for is avoiding the word then all the time so it doesn't get overused, keep that mine and continue writing.

Got to the first chapter, funny thing is I started on the second one first by accident and I like it a lot, and like the second chapter the first chapter has a lot of great detail to the main characters along with a fun atmosphere, the writing style too is of my liking since I as well, started that way.

I will take that advice and make it a thing then since I've been told that once, but all and all I can't wait to review your series.

I really do believe my story could go somewhere and that with a little push and support that I've worked towards it could get a decent audience, I like the direction I took this series and hope to continue!

Fun story, I enjoyed the first chapter and the chemistry between the two characters first introduced, I hope you continue to write fun little banter between the characters.

So these are different people connected to the book of poison Master, interesting plus Lester seems slow not seeing that the book is talking about his rival.

This first chapter had some great chemistry between Ron and Vira, not only that had some funny anime tropes in there as well, hopefully things take off next chapter!