Peyo78

The story is good, I just hope that in the future the harem is not just for decoration...................................................................................

It is entertaining, I cannot give an accepted rating for the number of chapters but if the story is going to continue with the same spelling and the same quality I see a great future for it.

10/10................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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A simply perfect story, in all the years that I have been in a web novel this story is easily placed in my top 5 and in the top 1 of HOTD fan-fic.(translator)

I love the pace of the story so far, not too slow and not too fast, the interaction of the characters feels very fluid and not at all forced (the characters feel alive) especially the grandfather. ha ha ha follow the author. 10/10

It is among the top 3 of the best genshi impact fanfics on this platform. ..................................................................................

I read in English and I don't really see any pronoun errors