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Black_Sirius_42253 years agoPublicado porSo far haven't read a story like this, is funny-ish, revolves around the daughters and the system was something unexpectedly expected, if you know what I mean. But I hope the MC is a bit strict on the older daughter, ik she is a kid but hey it may help in the future
- Black_Sirius_42253 years agorespondió a DaoistKaname
you are right, didn't notice, sorry
- Black_Sirius_42253 years agorespondió a Black_Sirius_4225
it supose to be heroes but misspelled it T^T
- Black_Sirius_42253 years agoPublicado por
The story has a good plot, so far so good, MC is smart but still human enough to make some mistakes. I also like that the story didn't suddenly got all romantic.
- Black_Sirius_42253 years agoComentado por
Did they come for him?
- Black_Sirius_42253 years agoPublicado por
The plot itself is good, rasing the future herpes of the universes, however the grammar is kind of difficult to understand. Most of the sentences make it difficult to understand what is really going on.
- Black_Sirius_42253 years agoComentado por
I am confused 😕 ...is it minus 10%? or not?
- Black_Sirius_42253 years agoPublicado por
Is a really good book, for those who don't like much romance this one is perfect, the beginner is title confusing but other than that is pretty steady plot.
- Black_Sirius_42253 years agoComentado por
I think it is the older man that hit the car
- Black_Sirius_42253 years agoPublicado por
Honestly the beginning wasn't that bad, but everything change at the bar fight scene....like the he'll dude, the MC was all about revenge for what haooeb to him and his girlfriend but he never show real concern, he only visited once also at the first opportunity he cheats, and he could had done so much with his ability, like become Moriarty!
