DaoistYuuishi

I really appreciate the actually good grammar. Better than a good 80-90% of novels here. Also, I really enjoy music industry novels and so far it’s holding up quite well, thanks for that author, it’s pretty refreshing.

Don’t get me wrong I feel like the idea of the novel overall aside from the mc and setting is quite good. Feel like those things are just outlandishly poor quality compared to the actual concept.

By far the most generic one dimensional cliche blend I’ve ever seen. Sort of like a mix between Superman and Wall-E. Absolute peak generic, unrealistic, and unoriginal pure justice seeking mc with absolutely 0 explanation as to why or how. So much so that it actually hurts to read. I pushed through because I actually love isekai, even if it’s bad, but I actually couldn’t press forward. Additionally, completely generic scientific raised organism escapes to Earth and protects it plot line. Absolutely 0 originality and absolutely 0 anticipation for the plot of the future. Mc is literally just a copy and paste of Superman in this twist. No actually acts like that and after reading many novels with mc’s like this, it’s actually boring and cringe to read.

R u good bro? who hurt u? do u need therapy?

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Thats not how buisness investing works whatsoever they bought out all his costomers and liquited the shares collapsing his buisness by half aka the money he keeps in the buisness itself and all investors pulled out also for the multiple slaps to the face his stocks crumbled when every investor in your buisness goes down unless you stopped accepting investors in beginning which he didnt they build up which is the point of money gaining in investments you loose 25-50% of profits + his workers gone 10% gone shares gone another 20% gone so 55-75% of his buisness gone already + them blowing up his main income source we can safely say after all this anywhere from 85-99% of his money is gone

that would completely and utterly defeat the purpose of shakuni the charecter in general if the entire point of his charecter if to be undefeatable while overcoming impossible odds one way or another why would we need shakuni at all and no shakuni = no novel

Awesome appreciate it it’s a good story

will you pls continue the legacies one i thought it was awesome cuz i can never find a good legacies fanfic so it would mean alot if you continued the one where he is a mikaelson