This story has my favorite niche, being reincarnated or transmigrated as an NPC, but the background of this story is first off, not good, I’m not saying its bad, but I just don’t think this can work well, it doesn’t really sound reasonable, and secondly, why am I reading all this? The story still hasn’t started? This is probably one of the worst ways to start off your readers, but again, I haven’t actually read far, I’m just going to drop now though, wish u luck.

Why did it change from 10 to 20 without any explanation? Story cant be consistent for one chapter. I hope it gets better

Im tired of you people not actually reading the story. I would get if you don’t like how the powers work or something, that’s fine, just go read something else, but no, you dislike something that was very clearly explained, explicitly.

I heard this was a good ntr story, now I know there are no good ntr stories….

Just one of the idiotic people for some reason want to put down others and their achievements. Maybe because they can’t achieve the same or some other petty reason.

I find it funny your not complaining abt the mc giving his brother an unexplained power up and instead worrying abt him being the Emperor, do you really think being in that position is easy? Even a regular CEO of a company has a ton of stuff to do.

It was awhile ago, but if it was this simple, I wouldn’t have dropped it most likely. It was prob bad in another aspect idk, it was awhile ago.

I would buy it more if he was surprised, but scared in that situation? There aren’t enough sweets in the world to bribe me…..ok, maybe there is, but you get my point……

No matter what, a five year old child without any supernatural abilities can’t scare a fully grown man who has killed many people, with just a stare, it just doesn’t make sense.

Why didn’t he take the meat, the wolves are STARVING!!!

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I won’t waste too much time on this review, which is abnormal for me, but lets begin. The author killed their own story, everything went out the window around chapter 13 (if I remember correctly). The story was progressing wonderfully, then all of a sudden, the author just decided to change everything they set up? It really felt like more of a betrayal, the author switched up last minute, then also you have to pay after like 16 chaps. I don’t know if the author had a hand in that as well, but if they did, all I can say is they absolutely butchered what could have been a good read.

Author, really just change the beginning of the story if you wanna go this route, I think how the story was progressing before was great, and that this is just a huge quality drop, but I’m not saying you can’t do this, I’m jus saying, if you want to do this, change the beginning of the story for it to make more sense.

This chapter is so weird, I feel like it doesn’t fit with how the story was progressing. Isnt he suppose to be innocent?

Skyrim completionist > Skyrim casual player

I don’t see where the story is going, and I thought the mc is an oktaku, or at least read a lot of fantasy, he doesn’t give me that feelings, and as others said, his personality is kind of jumping. I don’t mean this in a bad way, but I dropped around halfway into this chapter, I liked the premise, but the execution just isn’t there for me.

I think the author just wants to get these parts over with quickly since if you watched thhe anime/read the LN or WN, you already know all this stuff. Basically, author cant skip the set up, but also dosent want to just repeat stuff u would already know, my guess is after the set up, story will improve in quality, I think....

This seems so accurate to his personality that I thought it was cannon for a second.

Lets give this another go, came back here because I didnt read the entire thing, and after awhile, forgot a lot of stuff.