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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

congratulations

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Before I am new in WN, and my Favorite genre was isekai. I read few new WN and I like that. New concept. Keep it up. ]I said, you did a good job in writing, you need to fix some grammar, otherwise it's a good story, especially your main character, in your tag you were not put action tag, so I can't say that your story is less of fighting. well, keep it up

Before I am new in WN, and my Favorite genre was isekai. I read few new WN and I like that. New concept. Keep it up. He finally become two years old, and the time has came when he gain all his powers. That night his body start glowing, Devi didn't understand what's going on, she afraid " maybe something bad happens?" She try but she can't go near him. His body extract extraordinary aura that even scared the godly fenrir. After few minutes she finally realised that the aura extract from Sun it's not ordinary, "It's Heavenly power" Sun lost unconscious all this time. The glow deem litle by litle, the whole night he recoil his powers. Next morning everyone gather front of his house, What's going on, what that mean everyone want an explanation. Sun finally gain his consciousness. "Moo---Mom? " Devi-"Sun, sun I am here! Thank goodness you are