TanjBear
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i can reconfirm that the first chapter is word for word verbatim. I got the novel you mentioned in my library, its just a picture and nothing else. either the author removed it or the webnovel did. I wouldn't be surprised if someone's copy pasted this story and that's why it got removed in the first place. or the author made a new account and moved it over. possibilities possibilities.
this is the first rebels fanfic I've found and its great. I like the light saber bolt gun. fun idea. I like making new things from old thing. the shield that he has runs on a Khyber crystal. I would have him tweak it so instead of shield it could become a ring cutting enemies around him or less OP a momentary plumb of plasma. Keep it up your work is great.
I have thought about making fanfic with a time manipulating character for soo long. i get how he can use it to simulate other powers. freeze some air pockets and you got an invisible staircase or shields and barriers. super speed or teleportation based on outside perspective. or super punch using the differing speed & time between self and an object. or 1000 punches in a second. so fun and so broken. if a single person jumps in a room nothing much happen but if a few dozen do it'll collapse. just imagining the floor giving out and the mc just standing on air.