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Fraud.
So annoying, just deal with Nana already. She's nothing but a freeloader in his house yet she acts like a bitch around him. MC is just letting her be cause he's a doormat who likes being degraded like a typical xianxia MC—a not so subtle fetish from the author.
Probably the only distinction this author knows if only a girl kisses another girl or have romantic feelings for each other, that's what yuri is. A girl giving a girl pleasure, which what Akeno does is still in line on yuri. This author is a fraud.
Okay.. not bad.
This reward is contradicting for someone who wants to stop her from her yuri tendencies. Braindead author.
I thought this novel has no yuri? What a fucking scam. A girl pleasuring a girl is still considered a yuri, braindead author.
How is this not yuri when Akeno is also pleasuring Sona with the toy? This author is truly braindead.
These girls asking to revive that guy in exchange for themselves just made them seem like cheap ass whores, this author can't write for shit.
She looks okay, not a heroine material though. However, I still disagree with the decision to pair her with Saji. For someone who likes a greedy character, you could've just turned her into an Eiji admirer or supporter— a fanclub of sort, or whatever that could be positive for our MC, even if she's just someone who would appear once. I'm just pointing this out since it doesn't really align with the theme of this story.
It's still in bad taste to give Saji a love interest in a FF that has netori themes like this— especially when the MC is very possessive and greedy. He should be the only one winning in life. She may be just a side character, but I believe you shouldn't have given Saji a girl in the first place. I still commend your work though.