Nay_Lin_2613

Well I like the fact that the story focused on different pov instead of just focusing on the main character.And I am really looking forward to how the protagonists will met each other.One thing I like to point out is that you make typing errors and sometimes mistake your own character names .I was really thinking so hard when you mention Eleanora in Tamara's pov.I was thinking how the dead Eleanora come to the inside of palace lol.Anyway the way your story develop is interesting and I love your characters.I really hope you would not put harem in the story thogh.