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The_Overthinker3dComentado porThis segment should have been put inbetween the fights. Having no clue as to where the MC's are is absolutely frustrating. It also would have served as an incredible contrast to the absolute helplessness of the village's situation. I am not broody or dark, but I do believe many stories lack realism and stakes. It hurt more that I had no transition from this absolute mayhem. But overall, this was really good. I hate tragedy but I love it too. 100/10
Fred and Stephen happily travelled in their brand new pedal-powered boat, taking turns to drive it while singing songs, most of them [invented] by Fred over the years...- The_Overthinker14drespondió a A_simple_human
they rely more on their fruit grandmastery cuase they don't think Haki rules above all like Garp and Kaido lol
[Haki: Intermediate Mastery of Observation Haki, Advanced Mastery of Armament Haki, Conqueror's Haki (Advanced Mastery)] - The_Overthinker15dComentado porCh 134 Chapter 133: Entering Beast's Nest (4)
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He's this strong?
"Aramaki for King." - The_Overthinker15dComentado por
People that can KILL Kaido don't appear from thin air, he's an Emperor not a Warlord lol
Bastille, Senor Pink, and X Drake found their eyes twitching. - The_Overthinker15dComentado por
Same Energy
"Beast Pirates may have Kaidou, but we have Smoker." - The_Overthinker15dComentado por
Is it only me that reads everything Senor Pink says in a Spanish-Pirate accent?
"I agree, kiddo." - The_Overthinker15dComentado por
Btw, if you use the dashes, you need to have them in a set of two, otherwise it is grammarly incorrect. If you want to avoid the complicated set up and execution you can also change the world play. Instead of [Hana-no, Hina] you can say [Hana, or Hina to be more accurate, blah blah blah] This is just to help with the flow of story, you don't have to implement this but small details make all the difference.
Raising her foot, Hana—no, Hina stomped Orochi on his face, crushing it mercilessly. - The_Overthinker15dComentado por
"The food..." < "There was food...raining down from the sky!"
The food... was raining down the sky! - The_Overthinker19dComentado porChapter 131: Entering Beast's Nest (2)
- The_Overthinker20drespondió a Alex_Gutkovsk
A-huh, but why does it take Yonko level to split the sky? Is it because the expansion/potency of Conquerers Haki that manages to reach the sky is considered to be the best of the best? Also, whats to say they can't have certain strengths that can match a Yonko? They definitely cannot beat Kaido's consitution or raw strength but this level of Conqueres Haki is only seen in the absolute best of the best.
As our swords clashed, the entire world seemed to hold its breath. The space around us warped, and the ground beneath our feet cracked and opened, unable to withstand the sheer power of our collision. The skies themselves seemed to split under the pressure, as red lightning clashed against golden-black lightning, illuminating the battlefield with an otherworldly glow. - The_Overthinker20drespondió a Insta_usernameCh 130 Chapter 129: World In Chaos (1)
- The_Overthinker25dComentado porChapter 126: Round One (1)
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I think the imminent future part is unnessesary. I mean, what other type of OB Haki would he use? Perhaps, to differentiate between the Grand Mastery and future sight applications, you can just state a different flash of red. When you see this same line for the tenth time, it makes the story sound AI-ish.
A red flash burned past Damien's eyes, showing him the imminent future. - The_Overthinker29drespondió a Shogunate
I don't know. I'll have to ask him when I see him again, but I'll probably forget by then. Whatever is considered good in Rocket League, I guess?
Faulty weapons weren't a problem to him. All of his personal cache of weapons were bought from scrap boxes full of defective and damaged pieces. Broken tips, chipped edges, bent blades. He had practiced hours upon hours using weapons that had problems. A perfectly weighted and balanced shuriken was predictable; it allowed the user to know exactly how it would react when thrown; faulty weapons would deviate based on their defect. He had simply learned to detect the defect, predict the deviation, and adjust his form. - The_Overthinker1mthComentado por
Isn't this more of an oxymoron? 🤔
'Rather ironic.' - The_Overthinker1mthComentado por'She turned her head to face him, askingL'
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fear?
"Give it up already... that beast is frozen by fear and unable to save you from me, the great Hammerhand Hani," the pirate captain proclaimed, raising his arms to reveal the steel hammers that replaced his missing hands. - The_Overthinker1mthrespondió a Paulcait
have you ever touched really soft fur before? It's like your sense of touch gets super satisfied. Imagine how it would feel to give Baymax a hug 🫠
"Bwahahaha! That was exhilarating! Come here and let me feel that soft fur again!" Blake exclaimed, discarding his sword and lunging toward the wolf with unrestrained enthusiasm. - The_Overthinker1mthrespondió a Lilbigboss22
Huh? Is this a fan-animation? It looks REALLY good.
Of course, such a perilous quest promised a reward: a random martial arts manual. While I questioned its utility, considering the comprehensive training I received from my teacher, my primary focus remained on escaping this island and embarking on my journey to explore the vast and treacherous world that awaited me.