Forteller

Even in the US the draft literally exists. Humans are thrown in to die in war without them wanting to. Why the hell would it not be applicable to a freaking fantastical world? The idea of a nation not caring about their people and using them heartlessly something new? Oh maybe, it could be a plot point in the story? Maybe there's a political aspect in all of this. You don't need to explain what you called stupid, I didn't say you called me stupid, I said you shouldn't call my hardwork stupid. I don't know what logic you're talking about, but you should use all your nonstupid intelligence and knowledge and create a story as well.

this isn't* children

Not everything you disagree with is stupid. I don't like the rampant use of that word in this app, especially on something I spent time coming up with. This is children awakening their powers then excited to train and begin challenging dungeons. This are children chosen at random to battle challenges in order to even awaken in the first place. So obviously, school or not, not many children will be so ecstatic about that. You can't gather all the children in the world and start training them because not all of them will be Marked, and Marks appear at anytime. Even a day before the Gates and that's why throughout those times, the commander and other ‘searchers’ relentlessly search and gather all of them to make sure none is left behind. Please read my book without unnecessary comparisons to your personal style or don't read it all. Or at least, don't come here and call my hardwork stupid.

Sorry! 😅 Hopefully you stick around and maybe there'll be a mass release in the near future.

I knew I've heard that name before.

😅I'm not that brutal. Trust.

of course 😅

MC on his way to ‘meat’ the female character

Woah. Thanks, Tee

😂😂😂😂 I can't even tell if you're being sarcastic