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Thanks for the author's chapter, very good beginning of the story, I think that women will draw more attention from the beginning to your protagonist than to that beta of the original, mainly to Yuyin not only because of her appearance but also because of her character mainly while the original is a shy Lucky, yours is direct and dominant, the only thing I'm suggesting is that the original protagonist is attracted to the FMC but our protagonist has already caught the attention of the FMC before.