AngelLily
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AngelLily5hrespondió a Akkuzz_69Ch 14 WHY ME?- AngelLily1drespondió a Sbee411
no no😂. Diego is someone else. not there father. Nix said "he" so he asked " "who?" asking who he was talking about by saying "he?" I think I didn't word it right in this chapter 🤔
"Who?" Valeric's edge of eyes looked at him. - AngelLily2drespondió a Cha_Ketha_Griffin
Corrected ✨
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - AngelLily2drespondió a The_Fallen_Writer
no
"Uh…" He stroked his chin and answered tentatively, "No, you won't change into one of my kind. I have no intention to turn you, so…as long as I don't release my pheromone, you will be just fine. That being said, it won't hurt the way you think. It's just a stinging pain, nothing more." - AngelLily4drespondió a Cha_Ketha_GriffinCh 10 Selena
- AngelLily5drespondió a Sbee411
😅😅
A dissatisfied look crossed the man's face. "You know what? I'm going to go home, and I'm going to have a warm bath and sleep. Goodbye!" He stormed to the door to leave but rushed back in a second. "Tell me who it is, though." - AngelLily5drespondió a Sbee411
😂😅😅
The man batted his white lashes at him, his smile stretching wider. "Yes, I am." - AngelLily5drespondió a dankoku
that's a whole level of rapid growth. Jesus!
Kai stood in front of the mirror and looked at himself. Indeed, he looked like a troublemaker with his unkempt hair, beard, and scarred face and body. - AngelLily5drespondió a dankoku
who? who grows beard at 12-13 or even 16? 😭😭
Kai stood in front of the mirror and looked at himself. Indeed, he looked like a troublemaker with his unkempt hair, beard, and scarred face and body. - AngelLily7drespondió a Cha_Ketha_Griffin
Thank you very much❤️
A LOW hum flowed through the air and Valeric plopped onto the sofa opposite the one she was lying on. He crossed his legs and folded his arms, with the sole purpose of watching and studying her. - AngelLily7drespondió a Jennifer_GoliahCh 1 Mr. Valeric Jones
- AngelLily23drespondió a Juliette_Douare
Typo😊
"Bone appetite," he said. - AngelLily23drespondió a Juliette_Douare_1457
😂😂😂hahaha.right .
The middle-aged man nodded. "Je m'appelle, Gauche. It's very nice to meet you too." - AngelLily1mthrespondió a Jean_Shank_3148
I hope you have fun❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ so glad to have you!!
"Little wife, which house comes with no stairs?" Adrik glanced at her and they took their seats at the dining table. - AngelLily1mthrespondió a Jean_Shank_3148
I'm so glad❤️ I have a new author account if you'd love to check my new books there. penname: PeachBunBun
"Little wife, which house comes with no stairs?" Adrik glanced at her and they took their seats at the dining table. - AngelLily2mthrespondió a Isabella0_0
?
The latter whispered back, "He is the first son of the wealthy Moriarty household, Young Master Edward." - AngelLily3mthComentado por
She's blind?
"Young lady, please don't lose hope, your mother said she has found a good doctor overseas, and he's coming here to work alongside other notable doctors to fix your eyes…they've even fixed a surgery date…" - AngelLily3mthPublicado por
Five chapters in and I'm already hooked. I love the main character Song Zhuyu. He's charismatic and I find him funny too. The plot is amazing, personally, I love it. Grammar is a 10 out of 10. Flow is perfect, nothing to break your immersion at all. Also, Song Zhuyus is very likable. I really recommend and I think should try it out. It's worth every read ❤️
- AngelLily4mthComentado porCh 2 Demon's Mark
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