HeyitsKeiichi

its my first original works so there is a lot mistake, by far I tried to do my best using my limites knowledge of proper grammar and english so be sure to point out when I do make mistake, the beginning will be slow and I am planning to make it slow, I will take it slow as to get you guys to grow together with Silver as he make his path towards his conquest and creating his own book of legend

UNS

dosen nya kek tai, gw ngajuin ga di acc2, ampe eneg udahan

I was thinking that Riboku should have the same strength as a regular advance General but Idk my self

good one, Imma make one, thanks for the reminder, I have been bothered because I seems to forget something and you just reminded me of it, thanks a lot

yea, the typo in the first 2 chaps and so on ara horrendous, I have a big thumb for my small phone lol, lets not even talk about the delay of input, I think I do need a new phone

no helmet but they di use mask

personally thought so too, but my sister insist that with the character personality it would not suit him to have white sword in his waist, dunno why but I seems to trust her at the time writing it

here is Ying, its actually Yin with the way you write Sparrow is what I mean

noted