DaoZar

Yes, but you don't realize it, it's very well translated and doesn't have invented things like most "translations" that exist out there.

brother. I don't know how you manage to publish so many chapters a day but I hope that doesn't affect your health since this is one of the best Game of Thrones stories I've read. The cavalry charge was beautiful, it made me believe that I was there fighting. If I could pay you more, I would do so without hesitation, but the only thing I can assure you is that all my stones go to your work. I hope you finish it or at least don't abandon it, keep it up, a hug.

Thanks for the excellent story teacher. without realizing it I caught up, it's quite involving and I hope that your general situation has improved a hug and keep it up

an idea for yamato's full beast form. author-sama

Idolo tu historia tiene muchisimo potencial espero seguir leyendo. Un capricho de gusto personal no es necesario que escribas o describas todo el glosario que realizaste antes de publicar el capitulo de entrada seria mejor ir a la accion. En fin es solo una opinion es tu historia al fin y al cabo espero que no la dejes. Un abrazo

bro rereading your story and comparing it to the manga currently. It's scary and goosebumps how you hit things like the level 5 buster call the secret of alabasta among many things. You have true manga predictability. This is the best fan work I have read and will read about the world of One Piece without a doubt.

please continue teacher. I saved this story with the hope that at some point it would continue

bro really delete it. In many chapters you can see that the fic itself sucked your balls. You basically divided into 2 things, I'm too broken but meh and I'll do it later. no one expects a tolkien play here but at least some love for your own work. On the other hand, it is noticeable that you did not like this work at first since I was reading your story of the god of the forge and it is a 9/10 so far I will be totally aware of that work of yours

he died?

Very good story really. I must admit that at first I did not have faith in him since my brain could not concede what a semi-all-powerful beast like Madara would be like in the world of avatar, I thought that he would be one of those typical protagonists who make the story bland, boring or simple for be so powerful I must say that it took me a huge surprise, it even gave me a lot of smiles and good times in your current 46 episodes. With all my heart I hope for more chapters and I will pray to all the spirits so that you do not abandon this story. Peace brother keep it up.