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First of all this author is clearly smart but the funny thing is that the way he writes makes me feel like I'm reading the thoughts of someone and not a story. secondly the author has tons of info dumps that take up half the chapter and whenever a character speaks they all go into 20 year monologue and try to tell you their life story. what also pisses me off is that author keeps changing the name the main character uses with his alias multiple times in the same chapter and it is driving me insane. another thing that pisses me off is that a berserker is supposed to be a close ranged melee fighter yet now he's a long range fighter you can't just change the name of stuff and give it a completely opposite meaning. overall this novel has potential but is very poorly written
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