DKtheDaoist

Another disappointing chapter, an unnecessary drawn out fight. We did not need it, the fights have nothing new to them. They don't matter, they aren't even used to show us Grey's improvements just what we already know. I also know that he'd win all his fights with sage realm elementalists.

This story is torture, imagine using a thesaurus every few days to look up new words that actually lack context but feel right because they created a sense of a hyperbole. Everything is grossly exaggerated, everytime I read it, I feel like my neurons operate at a decreased rate. It is insulting to call this literature because literature is supposed to be artistic, this right here lacks the art it's pathetic. Then I see people hyping it and I wonder if they have anything to do with their lives because I doubt there is much going on with the brains they have. It used to be good, so good I could not wait for an update. I used to use my coins for privileged chapters, it would be an insult to people who write really good novels to purchase chapters from this when I could just wait for the next day and read another two pathetic chapters. I pity myself for having an obsession to see a book through to the end because I get so pissed off after wasting my time reading another chapter of this pathetic thing for a story. The characters are so flat they lack depth. New concepts that don't even go far are introduced, imagine were introduced to Nomological edicts, they seemed like this super powerful concept and just around a corner we learnt that there were Quasi-insuperable, them Insuperable, then Quasi-Taboo and then Taboo. It's exhausting. There is nothing new to it, just continuous introduction of concepts, it has really grown old.

Lately the novel is lacking progress, it's repetitive. I don't know where the author heard but he sure has a soft spot for fights, every two to three chapters there's a fight. Believe me you they are unnecessary because Grey is already invincible in the Sage realm but we are constantly seeing him in unnecessary fights and he is some how still testing his strength which we've never even seen him go all out except once. It's really boring, no development whatsoever that I'm just reading because it has that earlier appeal but it's really stuck now. You can do better author, try something original please.

I don't know why the chapters as of late show a change in Grey's personality, firstly he did something for that little girl which is completely not his style. Now he is underestimating his opponents, which is clearly not his style as although he knows his capabilities, Grey is not a proud person. This fight should have ended a while ago, it's stupid really, always fights that are unnecessary because Grey is already strong enough to be called invincible in the Sage stage, now we should only be shown him gaining power instead of this unnecessary fights we know he is going to win because no has forced him to go all out which just go to show they are useless. It's boring really.

A filler chapter 🤮

Always finding new realms😬 everytime I read cultivation novels😭

Something tells me that Void will probably be Grey's downfall, his actions tend to be very risky.

I'm seriously amazed by how much providence is amongst his friends, it's unbelievable honestly. Also why is leveling up so easy for them, I thought it was supposed to be super difficult to advance but in 5 years they are almost to the peak rank, in a state of war without a golden finger? Makes no sense. I get that you are trying to make them super talented individuals but this right here is just unbelievable.

So you are basically just writing one piece with an extra character? Good luck on this one . Will continue reading M.O.M, this one nope.

The logic behind this story is rather incoherent. The MC breaks through 5 stages of Qi cultivation in one day, then in another 3 days he breaks through 3 stages, then it takes him two months to breakthrough to the 9th stages of Qi cultivation? Like really? I know it's trying so much to make the MC the underdog but anyone who reads this and thinks it's okay should just go to the psych ward, something is probably wrong with their minds. Then there is the logic behind the sword cultivation as well, I mean it takes him one day to go from a clueless novice to achieving great sword intent, then he is expected to take one month to advance again? I mean the one about cultivation would have made more sense if he was practicing his swords techniques or alchemy but we are being given a load of mind reducing illogical chapters and we are supposed to make do with it? Web novel has really deteriorated in their choice of trial novels because this right here is a waste of time. Read at own risk.