To be honest, it's been a really good read. Good grammar, a good plot, intelligent dialog and engaging battles. I expected there to be a fight in this first chapter, as fantasy novels usually do, so I was surprised when there wasn't, but it was made up for with great narrations that conveyed real tension between the characters. I'll be back to do another review in the future!

I will give my honest opinion, so... The main idea is very good, really very good, especially the powers and the world. At first, I didn't really like the protagonist, because he seemed very weak, only I quickly started to like him. Kaito is the type of protagonist more complex than I'm used to reading, especially me who likes chinese novels more, so you see a certain instability in the character's personality, because he is not as japanese protagonists of anime, who is the same from the beginning of the work until the end. In other words, Kaito evolves and as far as I read, it seems that he will evolve more and more. I want to see this boy become very strong!

The beginning is very common, but then it's really really good! 5 Stars! I hope this work goes much further. Very good................................

Amazing how addictive this story is! I started reading and I'm here every day waiting for more. This here really needs to become an exclusive and have an editor, because it's a mistake a story with this and a plot like this, not having an even higher quality of grammar.