Defno

The first chapters when MC is mentioned, and again in later chapters when MC was mentioned. If you planned this all along then you might need to go reread your story to fix those mistakes.

You did previously mention the protaganist as He/Him in early chapters, whether you intended to or not.

Author has refered to the protaganist as He/Him previously. So I have to assume this is a new twist the author decided to add.

Never updated the anti theft with the other half of chapters. So clearly those chapters were stolen from elsewhere

Not a very good story overall. It just feels like it is constantly jumping from event to event without anything in between. It reads more like a diary.

Utterly stupid. Why use your trump card as a random attack and not for a killing blow.

He didn't even bother to check if he could get to 200/200 without using a point.

Mist of illusion lvl 8

It makes no sense to keep calling it mana when you are talking about Qi levels, Qi recovery pills and Qi circulation.

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