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Hidden_Paragon6mthrespondió a FateDevilAceCh 333 Chapter 333- Hidden_Paragon8mthComentado porCh 305 Chapter 305
- Hidden_Paragon11mthComentado porCh 20 Pain
- Hidden_Paragon11mthComentado porCh 43 The Longer You Dance With The Devil, The Longer You'll Remain In Hell
- Hidden_Paragon11mthComentado porCh 40 Come On In
- Hidden_Paragon11mthComentado porCh 35 How About I Relieve It For You... With My Hands?
- Hidden_Paragon11mthComentado porCh 35 How About I Relieve It For You... With My Hands?
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- Hidden_Paragon1yrComentado porCh 124 Attack on the Jin Clan
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- Hidden_Paragon1yrComentado porCh 1 1 – Reincarnated
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"Your Highness as compensation I want to marry the current queen(30) and the eldest princess(27)." - Hidden_Paragon1yrPublicado por
- Hidden_Paragon1yrComentado porCh 15 When the World Seems Against You 3
- Hidden_Paragon1yrComentado porCh 81 The knight in grey and black armor and the deranged and sick girl he rescued
- Hidden_Paragon1yrComentado porCh 76 Vol. 1 Epilogue 2: The others that were left behind
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this chapter was a bit fast paced.
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Now that I'm done complaining I'll offer solutions Writers block sucks my friend, I go through it at times. The best solution I've found is to read other novels with a similar genre to yours. this usually helps me get inspired with new ideas to add to my story. another suggestion I'd give is if you're going to write a character(herione) you're sure the audience wont like at first. Try to make her come off in a positive life. Otherwise she'll probably suck the life out of your story. Oh and this chapter was really hard to read , I literally started skipping paragraphs (wich is never a good sign). Please take out that last paragraph you wrote about the world being a story it'll kill your story and take out all those A.N and silly jokes, they're not helping anyone. If you're going to forshadow a story make it subtle and leave small hints in the story. Mystery is Fun to unriddle. Your story is amazing! and I've always enjoyed reading it ( until recently). Don't stress yourself too much , you'll get back in your zone soon. I Know it.
Ch 67 Aftermath and Iris's true intentions