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You should put this in the story, describing it in better detail.
There are few details. What is that cave?. What are the symbiotes and what do they do?. Does everyone have symbiotes or just that particular group?
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Description of the fight is needed.
Chapter 2 and 3 are too similar. Many meanings are repeated.
First, short chapters and a lot of filler. Second, in this story EVERYONE is a good person, NO ONE has bad intentions. It's not realistic. Third, MC divulges his secrets to everyone. 130+ chapters and it's been less than 2 months. MC is too naive, too kind. When MC goes on a trip with companions, their names are NEVER mentioned.