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We already know all of that. Does it have to be repeated over and over again?

The time jumps disrupt the flow of reading. I also do not consider it a good idea to change the writing style in the middle of the story. By now, one has grown accustomed to the extensive level of detail. However, I still find it a pity that some chapters are very short and the overarching storyline progresses so slowly.

The story is good, but uploading a lot of copied old chapters is rubbish. Why does the author do that?

At first, the book was a really enjoyable read. Now, however—at Chapter 269—it is a complete disaster. Half of the chapter consists of a repetition of the previous one, but in a slightly altered form. Furthermore, scenes from earlier chapters pop up right in the middle of the text, forcing you to hunt around just to figure out where the actual story continues. I hope the author improves this. Aside from that, I do like the story—even if I can't quite grasp why Victor is attending the academy in the first place. He could have simply stayed home and gamed in total relaxation. I also find the sheer predictability of it all a bit disappointing: a villain who was expelled from the academy, and another player who has completed a World Story Quest. It seems there is someone else out there just like Victor?[img=thinking] And i don't like Xin Chen, she ist annoying.

Boring! He possesses infinite charm—so much so that everyone wants to marry Xin—yet the developers want to get rid of him. I stopped after 40 chapters.

Oder vielleicht, weil sie super nervig ist. Schade, dass pk noch nicht freigeschaltet ist.

Normally, I really enjoy stories involving necromancers and the undead. That is why I started reading this book. However, I stopped after just a few chapters. I simply don't like the story—neither its structure nor the writing style.

Oh dear, what a clichéd plot twist. As if anyone actually believes in "love at first sight." But probably the emotional, stupid mother does.

What I like is finally having a female MC whose main goal isn't finding a man. However, I have a fundamental problem with the story: Mirabella doesn't really fight; instead, she's showered with cheats, which she then just tests. Cupcake basically just sits on her shoulder the whole time and isn't relevant to the story (except for Mirabella saying she's family). I also don't know who this Julien is supposed to be. I'm already past chapter 130, and so far there's no character with that name. Yet he's listed as the MC. I still want to know how the story ends.

Was ist das für eine abartige Szene. Vor allem: Wieso muss er dafür am Leben sein? Das ist einfach kranker Scheiß 👎🏼