Sara_Borden

This good story needs a better translator and editor to help with wrong names and mixed up personal pronouns. It's getting difficult for this reader to mentally get the correct words to make the sentence or paragraph make sense.

This good story needs a better translator and then editor for mixed up names.

What happened ? The three siblings were about to get in an altercation at the river and all of sudden they were carrying water up the stairs? Otherwise, it is a good story !

What a fantastic gripping terror/thriller story! The story automatically grips you inside and you can't put the story down! Thanks to the wonderful story telling from this author! And thanks to Webnovel for publishing better written e-stories! I will definitely look for more stories written by this author to read!

A very well written and interesting story . This is slightly different from the other reincarnated storylines . The author slowly builds up the character and personality in each person. I certainly appreciate the differences in this story. It makes it very enjoyable and entertaining to continue to read on to find out what happens next

A fascinating storyline that is different from nearly all others on Webnovel. Thank you for your wonderful well written stories!

All I can say is "Whoa!" and "WOW!" What amazing imagery of words that pull you in deeper and deeper! -continuing to read-----

A wonderful storyline about rebirth. I will continue to look for and read other stories written by this same author. Kudos to this author!

So much imagery and vividness of your words! Thanks for another awe-inspiring chapter!

A wonderful, wonderful story! Thank you such a well written story! I have begun to read this,so I don't really know about the author's updating stability; but since I have given 5's for everything else, I also gave the author a 5 on updating.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]