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Your writing skills are so amazing that seems to more realistic. This is probably the longer story from you so far. Have a great journey my dear.
Its a lesson for us to avoid the unusual use of gadget, specially for our child. More elaborate story will be expected next time from this promising teenage writer.
Awesome creation. Really heart touching. Just try to make more suspense. Hope for the reward. One day you will be a famous writer. Wish you all the best.