thezerozero0

i know this may come as unpopular but i quite enjoy this one better than the other ones you have written, at least on plotpoint and grammatical errors, not to say the others were bad but this one takes the cake for me. id like to read more of garth and jason adventures

PREACH IT BROTHER

this is quite possibly one of the best fics i have ever read about the setting, now it would seem like im glazing here but lets be honest most fics of this setting are subpar, both on the grammaticall axpect and plot, also to be noted its quite refreshing for once not having a targaryen oc but a stark one whose not a complete dumbass on more than one occasion or, in the worst of situations a mary stue. love also the pacing of the romance in it and, not to spoil anithing how they interact whit each others (hope they get a move on) the only con i see here is the post timing but thaat can be allways fixed have a good time.( a professional reviewer)

i may be biased as this stands as one of the few fics of TLK on the site, but its premise is good. the only thing i can really complain about is the harem tag because i dont know if youre going pokemon style or the sensible way and stopping at two, for the rest i can see this being a enjoyable fic (sorry for my grammar its my third language)

we got you brotha

this Is according tò my research on any site regarding this topic this Is the only fic i found which has a male MC using airbending in any type of situation, also seeing as this Is the only One i found whit a good storyline i have the highest hopes for this. good luck

i mean its the only frieren fic that covers this topic (what if a demone could understand human emoticons and the consequeces of that) right now and i want tò see where this goes, good luck.

i was wondering of Zoro as we have seen retained his haki would he have access tò curse Energy or does he get his father ability "heavenly pact" includig the divine restriction?

italiano spanish and german

also Sorry forn he grammar english Is my fourth language