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Thank you for the review. I'm planning on adding more depth to the characters and edit the chapters soon.

Thanks I'll be working on editing the chapters soon

Thank you. The story gets much better later with more interesting characters and events :)

Thank you for the review. I'm gonna edit the chapters soon. I know the world building is not that great but thats on purpose since the story is mostly about Peter and his crazy adventures lol. I'll flash the world more once I'm done with the water kingdom and explore the other races and kingdoms.

While this isn't my type of story the novel is still well written and has good characters with great background if you love vampires stories then give this one a chance :)

Few Grammars mistakes but nothing can't be fixed. characters are detailed and the world is interesting, the story has the potential to be great, keep it up, author :)

I Have to give it 5 stars alone for writing quality. I hope one day my writing skills will be just as good. I read the first four chapters and it's an interesting idea with a fascinating plot. Love the way you started the story. Let's see where the story go :)

Thank you

Ok so I read the first three chapters and it's an interesting idea with a fascinating plot. Love the way you started the story. It seemed much unique from other stories. I can't wait for chapters. this novel is going to my library.

Thanks