Blast_Niro

Oh well sorry then bro, but the way write feels so much like an AI wrote that it's uncanny.

dude why use chatgpt if you didn't even try to make it seem like you at least put some effort in writing it?

sorry dude but having the paragraphs in each chapter be that long is annoying to read, if you had read any fanfic here even trash ones they always have the paragraphs separated which makes it easy to read and enjoy but yours is the total opposite which is a shame as the story seemed interesting.

I respect that you are trying to get better using AI I really do, but with how AI is used a lot on this app when I see those words used my enjoyment just drops my guy and it gets replaced by annoyance.

yo, please tell me this isn't made with chatgpt man cause "reflecting" and "complexity" are a dead giveaway.

yeah I know it's slang but I want to know why a kid from the 1900s and from japan using the American slang of today?

seriously what's with the cuz? author be honest do like Snoop Dogg. is that why you keep writing cuz ? or are you just a hip hop kid?

cuz?? what she American or something ??

well if you actually wrote the mc's inner thoughts and actually expanded more on the dialogue then you wouldn't have had this problem otherwise this is no difference from AI generated story.

so you can make AI write this type of trash too? good to know I guess.