Inspired Author in training. Preparing for an official novel through fanfictions. Salted fish~
Escribiendo
de lectura
282
Leer libros
thank you. I will drop a chapter tomorrow I'm gratitude of your help.
Please do🙏🙏 Where can I read it?
Thank you
good Reader, are you perhaps, in the know how of the fanfiction's name? I would be eternally indebted to you and will make sure to drop a chapter tomorrow if you can provide the sauce.
got it
there should've only been a single S rank dungeon at this point in the story, that being Kamish
It was sooo good 😫 Every chapter was fairly long, and the dialogue was so incredibly well written. it felt like I was reading an actual novel. not to mention it was so so entertaining.
Thanks for your hard work. But I must say– and I say this with all due respect– the story doesn't seem like it's going anywhere. I get that you're trying to go The long route and develop the Mc over time, but for me(and I say this for me, specifically) it doesn't seem interesting. there's isn't a lot that has been done all this time. Take this one for example. There were only a small amount of actually useful paragraphs here. in short, the entire chapter could have been summarized in about 200 words. I feel like that's why it feels a bit too bland for me. the story slow paced(which isn't a bad thing), and combining that with a lot of filler information in the middle ruins it for me. there's been little progress in the last couple of chapters and that leaves me having mixed feelings about this work. It is trying to do something unique, but it's not framed very well. Then again, I'm writing this comment very very late into the night, so sleep deprived as I am, take this comment with a Grain of salt.
As a reply to the comment above me, but also to speak directly to the author, I think this is a good decision. OPM and Overlord only truly work because they are heavily focused on the side characters and how they tackle challenges. While OPM plays on a comedic value, comparing the heroes and Saitama's efforts to provide entertainment, Overlord leaves one waiting for the opposition to be crushed through brutal efficiency– both of which, as far as I can say from my experience reading webnovels, are unviable in a fanfiction. Not sure about Eminence in Shadow though.