readerproof2322

lowercase i, i think it wasn't intended

i think it should be "who's" instead of "whose" in this context

i think you forgot an apostrophe, so it would be "Crabina's"

i think you again meant "busy" with one s

i think you meant to write "worse" instead of "worst"

I think that "i" should be capitalized

not gonna assume anything but i think you meant "clicked on" instead of "In"

i think you meant to use either ' or " but you used both or you used two of them, i can't tell

i think you should add a comma between "herself" and "still"

i think H in here needs to be capitalized