Leon_Harris_5385

I very sorry for your loss, and I am very happy you are back. I look forward to reading more of your work, but go at you own passe and take any time that you need. I will be waiting as long as need. for the next chapters.

Looking forward to where is story is going So far your character is quite interesting. I also like the system so far

Now that the story is getting going, with character interactions, the recent chapters, 7 onwards are quite enjoyable. I've deleted my old review, as now people can keep reading after the initial power building. Looking forward to what comes next

I really enjoying how this story is going. I'm looking forward to Freya meeting the family

I went in thinking It would be a guy from the 21st century interacting the the Orville crew. It was not. The is not character interaction, they main character is bland with not personality and doesn't interact with anyone. There is also no connection to the story of the tv show.

While this story can be good, it completely ignores marvel. Multiverse fan fictions are fine, and this one is written mostly well, however the title and picture both suggest it will at least be centered around marvel and expand to the multiverse. This should really be listed as a stargate-multiverse fic

I'm really liking what you are doing. The fact that you are willing to change this from the original plot is great. An idea would be to give Elena a reality check about the Salvator brothers.

Defiantly not

I don't think bonnie Klaus would work, she is probably the one who hates Klaus the most

Freya With his knowledge he can free her early and it means Rebecca will still be able to follow canon when you want