Twilighflame

Will Nari be in the harem?

Thx for the chapter

One of the worst chapters I've ever read.

What's wrong with you author? You're now writing about love interests being raped? Increasingly disappointing.

I READ TO 186 CHAPTER. Positive Aspects: *Good romance. In my opinion, it's the best part. *Decent +18 scenes. Nothing extraordinary. *There is no system. Negative Aspects: *Protagonist with average intelligence. It seems to decrease as the chapters go on. *Chapters contain many grammatical and ortographics errors, etc. Not quite MTL level, but still annoying. *World-building. I know almost nothing about the world even after 200+ chapters. *Fights. The battles are nothing special. Tags Found: Neteroi , Anti-hero Protagonist. Regarding the first tag, the MC's behavior is a bit confusing. He gets involved with women who are already in relationships, but the nature of these relationships is never clearly defined, which is frustrating. They just seem like friends with benefits, which is annoying because these women are very powerful and have interesting backgrounds. What a waste...

I can't stand it anymore. Why, author, did you make Maya marry that idiot Jin? I don't understand anything. If she's so strong, then why did she choose him? This is where I stop, folks—I don't know why I expected so much from this novel...

Author-san, please answer me the following question. Will Maya ever become part of the harem at some point? Because, as I see it, they just seem like friends with benefits. Honestly, I don’t understand why she is married to that idiot "Brother Jin." That is one of the things that annoys me the most about the novel. You never really define this relationship...

I've kept this novel on standby for a long time. To be honest, I only unlocked these specific chapters when I heard about them just to see if the NTR thing was true. I don't know the world, nor the MC's personality, and I only know a little about the female characters. In short, these chapters have shown me how to throw away characters with potential. Well, did I mention this was on standby? Well, now it won't even be in my library. Good luck, author...

Nice

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