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here is a review from me. I was thinking of some ideas and this novel clicked in my mind. though there are some mistakes and issues plot holes, it is because there are fu*king too many characters. it confuses me but for a better story I have to write it . Read it. as for the mistakes and issues I will review them and try to correct them to the best of my abilities .
Intresting Story . This novel is good . I like it. Though the chapters are short otherwise this novel has the potential to grow and become famous . And I found an interesting thing that my novel also has the MC with the same first name and the supporting character name is also the same . plus the system name is also the same 😁😂. chapter 17 is written 2 times you should correct it . All good , continue updating I am keeping my tabs on it.
too short
whats's this? what is god child ? who is apostle
hehe ...... new mystery
btw thank you for your support .
I am trying to write a chapter of 1000 words now .... I am new so I don't have any experience
I will review myself ...... though this review may be wrong as there could be many improvement .😞😐