why kumogakure in USA because the leader is black?! Haha

kinda just want him to make onepiece then spam devil fruit

it's boring........................................................................................................................ and that's the truth. that's it.

lol

his experience is dozing off on the void lol.

it's to force plot

it's kinda hoeing with your original character making original stories on a fanfiction

first in the starting chapters mc is a crybaby pathetic. imagine he reincarnated and always cry like a bitch how old is he then for crying like then mc weak to bell gonna crush him like nothing bell can catch up to him.

I like it I'm still in chapter 26. gotta comment need to know if he gonna use mana in this Novel and if it's good to the novel or ruin it story. please someone comment

mc gay as fck simping on gon and other characters like is the stupidest shit

this was good but why did he forgot he got parents

gonna need to say this to you and to everyone gonna read this novel. this is the best fanfic pokemon I've ever readen to the point I don't want to read other pokemon fanfic to just not disturb me from reading this fanfic. so please don't stop on making more chapters.

just a translation you guys can find it in websites more chapters

it's fcking trash garbage novel. slow paced where mc got trash by side characters. like trash seriously thought it was good but this is going to nothing don't expect it to be entertaining

i log in to my account to just say.. slowpaced is not your thing

the tornado kinda force into the story

this is one of the best fanfiction of onepiece don't stop making

why though? will he gain anything by contacting them. is there a mission or will he get stronger

we should sue him if he stop making this novel

same shit. mc got caught because of being mutant got power got to X-Men and shit